December 7, 2008:
I glance at my hockey bag and wonder why it looked so small before slinging it over my shoulder think nothing of it. I get in my car and drive to practice. Once I arrive at the rink I open my bag to find that I’m missing my pants and shoulder pads, necessities for any sort of hockey. I start to freak out. Rummaging through my teammates bags and finally I find a pair of pants. i throw them on and run into the pro-shop, where I am currently employed, I ask my manager in a frantic mess “Chris let me borrow a pair of pads I’ll pay u back later it’s an emergency.”
“Well Sheff I don’t know if that would be alright you know our policy on IOU’s.”
I hated that guy so much, and after arguing and complaining with him for five insanely long minutes I convinced him to let me pay for the pads later. I run onto the ice close to fifteen minutes late.
December 7, 2008 after practice:
“Sheff, will you wash my pants and bring them to practice tomorrow.”
“yeah sure no problem”
Friday December 21, 2008:
I turn on my phone after school. One missed call and one voicemail from Chris Street. I call my voicemail.
“Hey… Sheff its Chris Street over here at Total Hockey” like I didn’t know where he worked “you know you haven’t paid us back for those pads you borrowed in about two weeks now. If you can bring in the money on Monday the next day you work that would be awesome. Ok, see ya later.”
Monday December 23, 2008:
“Sheff, by any chance do you have that money for those pads u bough.”
“Ugh… ya know what Chris I don’t. Sorry.”
Tuesday December 24, 2008:
I turn on my phone after school. One missed call from Chris Street and one missed call from Chris Street. “Hey there Sheff it’s Chris over here at Total hockey. As you know yo haven’t paid for those shoulder pads in about three weeks now. So... we’re going to go ahead and discontinue your employment over here.”
Practice December 24, 2008:
“Hey Sheff do you have my pants today.”
“Ugh… no sorry I forgot.”
About two days ago:
“Sheffield do you have your homework”
“Uh… I Forgot”
Wednesday, September 16, 2009
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"One missed call from Chris Street and one missed call from Chris Street."
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I dont really know what your question is thats being answered. Also, some grammar errors and repetitiveness
I understand that the focus of your paper is to show that you procrastinate/forget things often. I think there are some places that you tell when you could show. For example, "I call my voicemail", you could leave that out and go straight into his annoying message. I really like what you are doing with it so far, I'm curious to see where this story is going.
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